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The Oblong Box
by Nick Sumner
Part One: The Box
He had gone with the oblong box directly from headquarters to the airport, his
car passing swiftly through the streets of the darkened capital escorted by two
motorcycle outriders, they were not really necessary, in the late cool hours of
an autumn evening there was hardly anyone around. The light aircraft was waiting
for him as they had said it would be, its engine already turning, the pilot was
busy with the last of his pre flight checks, he looked tired, exhausted in fact
but saluted when he saw the Colonel’s uniform.
The Colonel made himself as comfortable as he could in the cramped, noisy
interior of the aircraft. As they climbed into the darkness the little plane
shook and rocked in turbulence, the note of its engine changing as it reached
altitude. His eyes probed the starless darkness outside the window but finding
nothing to alight on there, came to rest on the tense features of the pilot
beside him, his face lit by the green glow of the instruments.
The Colonel's hands rested on the box in his lap, they had not told him what the
box contained and professional that he was, he had not asked. His mission was a
simple one, deliver it in person to the general at the beachhead. He wondered
what the box could contain? It wasn't heavy, wrapped in brown paper, tied with
string, about sixty centimetres long and twelve centimetres square. Not papers,
not maps, but what?
They had called him at eight o'clock, he had been working late. In the
conference room maps of the beachhead were laid out on the tables, he had seen
at once that the situation was grave. The General Staff had looked drawn,
resigned, when one of them had handed him the box he had held it reverently as
if it contained something precious but the look in his eye was serious, gloomy,
full of misgiving. He might have felt annoyance at being treated as a delivery
boy, but he was also glad to be going to the front, he felt the old thrill of
excitement and fear, he had not seen action for a very long time.
Uncomfortable in the silence he said to the pilot;
"You look tired." The pilot turned towards him, as if noticing him for
the first time.
"Yes Colonel I am pretty tired." The pilot smiled self-consciously, a
rictus grin without a trace of humour. "I don't think I've had more than
three hours sleep in the last four days, my squadron has been flying supplies to
"In this little plane?" Asked the Colonel. He meant it as a joke but
the pilot smiled again, and again the smile was mechanical, joyless.
"Yes in this little plane, we've got every aircraft that can carry a load
dropping supplies, they've even attached panniers to the fighters, you can
imagine how pleased the fighter jocks are about that. All they’ve told us is
that the situation is critical and our soldiers need every ounce we can drop
He hesitated for a moment as if wondering if he should continue before he said.
"Our losses have been bad, we were told the enemy fighters had been
defeated but we've lost half the squadron, I'll be honest with you Colonel I am
quite happy to be flying this mission tonight, after we land I'll have to go
straight back." The Colonel did not reply.
Part Two: The Burning Shore
The first flush of a grey dawn was lightening the eastern sky as he picked his
way as swiftly as he could along the quay. The dock was in chaos, crates of food
munitions and medical supplies were stacked everywhere, the shouts of soldiers
and dock workers, the noise of cranes moving the crates onto vessels of all
shapes and sizes. From one, a procession of orderlies bought men on stretchers,
some of them whimpering in pain even as the cranes moved nets filled with
supplies over their heads
He found his way to the quartermaster's office, it was crowded, blazing with
light that spilled out onto the dock despite the blackout, men hurried in and
out clutching manifests, harassed, panicky, above the hubbub of voices two were
raised in argument.
"Don’t you understand? The medical circumstance is beyond desperate over
there, you must send these hospital supplies immediately!"
"I’m sorry doctor but my orders are both clear and explicit, munitions
first, food second, medicine third." The Colonel had no time for this.
"Which one of you is in charge?"
"I am." Said the second man. The Colonel told him his name.
"Ah you are here Colonel, good, the boat is waiting for you."
It was a motor torpedo boat, roughly thirty metres in length, two torpedo tubes
either side of the open bridge, two twin 20 mm gun mounts, one before the bridge
and one aft, its engines throbbed and it sat in a reeking cloud of diesel smoke.
As he walked down the companionway he saw that the crew were lashing crates and
boxes to the deck
The captain, a Second Lieutenant was on the bridge, a cigarette dangled from his
lip, he saluted and asked if the Colonel was ready, they cast off and as the
boat nosed its way past the mole the note of its engine changed from a steady
throb to a thundering scream. As the throttles opened the Lieutenant flicked his
cigarette over the side, a tiny orange spark spiralling into the sea as the boat
leapt forward into the grey morning.
In the gathering light the Colonel saw that the vessel had suffered damage,
there were hastily patched holes from bullets or splinters in the sides of the
bridge and on her deck, the men too looked exhausted, they were unshaven, their
clothing rumpled and stained as if they had not changed for many days, the water
was choppy now and the boat bounced from wave to wave, he held on to the cockpit
coaming as the deck pitched beneath his feet. Instinctively he hunched into his
jacket and pulled his peaked cap down further as the wind of their slipstream
blew strong and cold in his face On the horizon - the enemy coast - a great dark
column of smoke rose into the clouds, it looked like a funeral pyre, an omen of
doom, they were heading straight towards it.
The cloud was beginning to break up, shafts of sunlight streamed through its
tattered edges from the dawn behind them and suddenly one of the gunners was
shouting "Enemy aircraft, seven o'clock!"
Three fighters in a loose V formation had dropped out of the low cloud and were
turning toward them. The formation split, one aircraft banked away to the port
side of the boat, the other two to starboard, the Lieutenant was giving orders
to the helmsman, they turned towards the two aircraft, shortening the distance
between them, giving the greater threat the smaller amount of time to bring
their guns to bear, but the Colonel knew even as they turned that the enemy
fighters were herding them, for while they sped as quickly as they could towards
the guns of the two fighters now in front of them, the third aircraft was
angling in behind and their relative speeds meant that the pilot would have a
much longer period of time in which to aim.
The aft 20mm guns opened up and suddenly the two fighters in front of them broke
right and left, but the Colonel looked over their stern to the third fighter,
the great disc of its propeller seemed to float inches above the water, its
wings caught a flash of sunlight as they rocked, then a ripple of fire spread
along their length and the bullets came whistling around them, the Lieutenant
shouted an order and the helmsman slammed the throttle back and turned the boat
broadside into the enemy fire, the Colonel lost his footing as the boat heeled
over, he fell to the cockpit floor as water came foaming white over the gunwales
but it was too late, the boat seemed to stagger under the thud of bullets
striking home and suddenly someone was screaming as the fighter roared overhead
seemingly inches from the top of the bridge.
The Colonel scrambled to his feet as the boat rocked from side to side but he
slipped and fell heavily back to the deck. He had slipped on the helmsman's
blood. The helmsman was dead, his body lay crumpled, a broken doll, one hand
still gripped the wheel, the side of his face smashed open, the Colonel could
see broken teeth and the white of bone through the blood and the ragged hole in
his cheek. Pinkish grey brain matter oozed from the helmet that still somehow
remained on what was left of his head.
Again the Colonel got to his feet more carefully this time, a wave of nausea
turned his stomach, he had not seen violent death close-up for more than twenty
years. The box had slipped from his hands and fallen into a corner of the
bridge, he scrambled to retrieve it but when he held it again the corner of the
wrapping was soggy with blood. The Lieutenant was shouting orders and took the
wheel himself but let it go suddenly, his hands came away from it bloody, he
wiped them quickly with a rag. Another sailor came and pulled the helmsman's
body out of the bridge.
One by one the crew reported back, the damage was light but the aft gunner had
been injured, he sobbed in pain, a bubbling cry of agony and despair. No one
spoke as slowly the boat moved forward again, picking up speed towards the dark
column of smoke that reared above the coast, towering over them like a
malevolent beast. The body of the helmsman was wrapped in a piece of canvas and
laid out next to one of the torpedo tubes.
Another crewman took the wheel, the engines opened up again and the boat once
more surged forward. The Colonel fought to bring his mind back under control, he
lit a cigarette, ‘Don’t think about the dead man, remember your mission…’
For him it had been many years since war had been more than just an exercise in
command and control, an abstract problem, in the past year the army had fought
brilliantly while he had had to content himself with paperwork, he wasn’t used
to this any more, but then, did anyone ever get used to it?
They were close to the enemy shoreline now and the lieutenant was giving him
instructions, he held up a map and was pointing to one of the beaches on which
the landings had been made four days previously.
"... we can't get too close to the beach - there's too many obstructions in
the water - including mines and booby traps, it hasn't been cleared." He
looked at his watch. "It’s now low tide, we will stay about a hundred
metres out, you'll take the dingy..."
The Colonel interrupted him
"But we captured the port on the second day, I was told you could take me
right to the dock." The lieutenant shook his head,
"No Colonel the port is closed, air attacks have been constant, there are
several hulks blocking the entrance to the harbour, we can't get into the port
everything has to go over the beach including you."
They could see the shoreline clearly now, high cliffs, peaceful green
countryside the column of smoke was rising from the town behind the port, as the
boat sped closer they could see burning buildings, the Colonel pulled his field
glasses from his pack but there was little he could make out through the smoke.
The beach was around the next promontory, abruptly their speed slowed to a
crawl, the smoke was thicker here and the choppy water was filled with debris,
pieces of wood, a life raft half deflated, the bloated body of a horse. A
landing barge down at the bows, abandoned, her wheelhouse blazing. The upturned
hull of another, the masts of a larger ship jutting from the sea. The man at the
helm conned them carefully, craning his neck to see over the bows.
With the engines throttled back the sound of gunfire came clearly across the
water, the rattle of small arms, the thud of exploding shells, it didn't make
sense, their forces had struck more than 30 km inland, they shouldn’t be able
to hear the sound of battle at that distance, had the situation degenerated that
The Colonel's eyes strained in the direction of the gunfire, the smoke cleared
in patches showing the beach, the sea wall and the buildings of the town behind
it and then the Colonel gasped, for a moment refusing to believe the evidence of
his senses as the smoke cleared some more to reveal the unmistakable shape of an
The battleship had died fighting. She had been deliberately grounded, probably
at high tide, the ship was listing at about 25° to port and had been driven up
on the shingle, her prow was only thirty or forty metres from the low sea wall.
Her ram bow was completely clear of the water and crumpled by the impact, waves
broke around her stern and there were two jagged overlapping holes beneath her
exposed waterline, both nearly forty metres in length. Her main deck was a
shambles, her hull and superstructure bore the scars of fire and shell impacts,
her four twin turrets all pointed in different directions, the guns at various
angles of elevation. Her casemated secondaries too were all run out and her
battered tripod fore mast, stark against the sky, loomed over them like a
gallows. The Lieutenant was speaking, there was weariness in his voice but also
"That happened the day before yesterday, they sortied a good portion of
their fleet, timed it perfectly, they came past the narrows and caught us at
sunrise, it was chaos, they went right through the escort and slaughtered our
transports, it was a massacre..." As his voice trailed off he pointed to
the battleship with his chin.
"She took two torpedoes, she was finished but they beached her and it was
nearly two hours before we could silence her guns. The crew didn't surrender
even when they had emptied their magazines, they fought on with small arms, I
don’t know if any of them survived..."
They could see the rest of the beach now, it was pitted with Shell holes,
crowded with the wrecks of smashed and upturned vehicles, two transport barges
were being unloaded even as shells exploded around them sending towering columns
of water into the sky.
"It's time" said the Lieutenant." As the boat came to a stop and
drifted for a moment, he again bought out the map. He pointed to a building
behind the sea wall, and then to a point on the paper. "That house is here,
the Generals Head Quarters are in this building here, its three hundred metres
east of this point, it’s a white hotel, we will hold our position for one hour…"
"No, my mission might take longer, you must wait for me."
"One hour Colonel, I’m sorry."
He rounded angrily on the Lieutenant about to order him to stay until he
returned but something in the man’s eyes told him that it would be a waste of
Part Three: The Broken Army
The streets of the town were deserted, some of the buildings were in ruins, most
were pockmarked with bullet holes, on one road some burned-out cars seemed to
have been assembled into a hasty barricade, an enemy tank with a thrown track
blocked another, on a third, one of his own tanks completely undamaged, its
hatches open. The ammunition, hull machine gun and radio had been stripped. It
had run out of fuel.
He ran from cover to cover bent double, his service pistol drawn, the oblong box
an awkward burden beneath his left arm. Shells were falling on the town and the
crackle of small arms seemed very close. He rounded a corner and saw three
paratroopers, a corporal and two privates, recognisable by their cut down
helmets and camouflage smocks. With their machine pistols they were covering
four men standing against a wall, they were prisoners, two were in enemy
uniforms, but the others wore civilian clothes. It was a firing squad.
"Corporal what is the meaning of this?"
The corporal saluted, he returned it, "Sir, these are enemy
"Two of these men are in uniform."
"I have orders to shoot all saboteurs in uniform or otherwise Sir, the
order comes directly from High Command."
He looked at the prisoners, each of them wore a different expression, one seemed
resigned, at peace, another met the Colonel's gaze with a look of curiosity, the
third hung his head fighting to control the sobs that were shaking his frame, as
his eyes met those of the fourth, the man began to shout in his own language,
defiance, fury and contempt in every syllable and the Colonel suddenly realised
that these were old men, the youngest was in his fifties and the two that had
uniform - the uniforms were twenty years old - they were from the last war, his
"Corporal two of these men are uniformed enemy combatants."
"Sir these men are saboteurs."
"Corporal we are soldiers, shooting surrendered enemy combatants is a
"Sir, I have my orders."
He looked very hard at the Corporal but the man's eyes could not meet his, the
muscle at the angle of his jaw worked nervously, his expression wavered between
repugnance and resolve.
The corporal saluted, his gaze fixed somewhere over the Colonel's left shoulder.
The Colonel did not return the salute, the enemy prisoner was still shouting as
he turned his back, he heard the corporal say ‘Fire.’, the quick rattle of
the machine pistols, the unmistakable sound of bullets hitting flesh. The
He was just a few tens of metres from the white hotel now, every window in the
building seemed to be smashed, part of the roof was missing, the chimneys
toppled, the walls riddled with bullet holes. He walked through the open gate to
find the garden full of wounded, they sat or lay on the ground, some were
unconscious, a few moaned in pain but most were still and quiet. He bent down to
ask one of them where the General was, the man saluted feebly and gestured
towards the buildings interior, as he turned to go he heard the man ask weakly,
"Colonel, please, do you have a cigarette?" He holstered his side arm,
gave him the rest of the packet and went inside.
The corridors too were crowded with wounded, on the stairs and in the
passageways. The general was quite alone in what had been a dining room, some
tables had been put together and on them a large map of the South East coast was
unfolded. The General stood looking through the open French windows, out into
what remained of the garden. The crack of artillery fire seemed very close, a
cigarette was held in his left hand. He turned as the Colonel came in.
"What can I do for you Colonel?" The colonel saluted, the general
returned the salute perfunctorily, his eyes were distant, dreamy with a
weariness beyond simple fatigue.
"I have come directly from headquarters, I am instructed to give you
this." He held the box out in front of him, the brown paper wrapping was
scuffed and torn, the blood on it had dried.
"What is it?" Asked the General.
"I don't know Sir, I was told only to bring it to you and hand it over in
The general sighed, stubbed out his cigarette and placed the box on top of the
map on the table. He cut the string, and tore open the brown paper. The box was
made of dark wood, beautifully polished, on the lid a gold eagle with a wreathed
swastika gripped in its claws.
"Ha!" An exclamation escaped the General, somewhere between surprise
"Of course…" But as he reached for the clasp they heard the sudden
snarl of aircraft engines very close. "Get down!" the General shouted
and both men sprawled on the floor even as the bombs burst nearby and the room
filled with choking dust. They lay there, coughing in the smoke, hearts pounding
as the sound of rifle and machine gun fire grew louder under the fading noise of
They got up and patted down their uniforms in silence. The General brushed dust
and masonry debris from the box, the gold eagle was dented. He undid the clasp
and opened the lid, inside was a blue Field Marshal’s baton, its shaft
decorated with eagles and Maltese crosses, his name embossed at one end, black
lettering on a white band. He held it up and laughed.
"And they say the Fuhrer has no sense of humour." He threw it back
into the box angrily, as if the baton had soiled his hand.
"General, I mean Field Marshal, Congratulations sir, but…"
"Congratulations? For what?"
"For your promotion sir." The General looked at him with contempt and
suddenly he was shouting.
"Promotion?" The word hung in the air between the two men,
"Promotion? We have lost this battle colonel, do you understand that? We
have lost it catastrophically, this will go down as one of the worst defeats in
history - that fool Goering has ensured it with his meaningless promises and
this…" He picked up the baton again, "…this is nothing but a
Again the baton fell back into the box, the General turned and walked once more
to the window. "You’re too late, I’ve already given the order to
withdraw, my staff are disposing of the papers as we speak." He paused
"If you have a way out I suggest you use it, we’re falling back on the
beach near here, but we’ve no prepared positions, The Kreigsmarine was almost
obliterated the day before yesterday, the Luftwaffe do not control the skies, we’re
practically out of ammunition and some of my men haven’t eaten in days. Not
many are going to get away…" His voice trailed off, he thought for a
moment, then turned once more to the Colonel.
"You realise no German Field Marshal has ever been captured by an
enemy?" He weighed the words carefully.
"I shall be the first." He paused again, his eyes looked outward
through the French doors and the clearing smoke.
"So be it."
For a moment the two men stood in silence. The Colonel saluted, clicking his
heels together in the Prussian way but the General was lost in his own thoughts,
looking out through the doors and did not seem to hear. The Colonel turned and
walked quickly from the room.
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